tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-602141042443953170.post6083944831959278831..comments2022-10-19T17:20:15.566-04:00Comments on Fictioncentric: Duck BlindAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11767171840288803866noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-602141042443953170.post-75470978928849892332012-10-28T07:15:52.844-04:002012-10-28T07:15:52.844-04:00Obviously, I hadn't browsed very far when I ma...Obviously, I hadn't browsed very far when I made my first comment about the briefness of your posts. Now I see you have fully developed short stories as well- so I probably won't finish my browsing this morning.<br /><br />I love everything about this story except the ending. You do a great job of immersing us in the world of decoy carving. (Whether or not it's accurate or not, it seems real). I also like the idea of bringing the tension in the marriage back in at the end. (The motel room scene is wonderful, by the way.) But if you're implying that Bea sabotaged his efforts with the bubble gum, I find it hard to believe that the judge didn't spot that right off the bat, well before the final decision. If you are implying something else, I didn't get it. <br /><br />Anyway,that's my two cents. I look forward to reading more.Fred Zirmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11711980324188979695noreply@blogger.com